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Party Ends Tonight, Life Begins Tomorrow.
Chapter one.
Naruto giggled and hiccuped as the room spun around him. He felt hands lightly pushing him towards the door, and saying “Naruto, why don't you step outside and get some fresh air??”.
He nodded blearily at the speaker and as soon he shut the door behind him he heard the lock click. Kiba's voice was heard on the other side, “Sakura, have you seen Naruto?”.
You could practically hear her smirking. “Only when he arrived. Sorry, Kiba.”
He sighed. “Oh well... I hope he didn't go outside, it's bloody cold out there, and it's snowing again.”
Naruto leaned against the wall, trying to think straight, shaking his head, trying to clear it.
Okay...Keys?
In Jacket.
Jacket?
Inside.
Walk forward.
Knock.
Waiiit....
Okay, no answer.
Turn around.
Find someone I know...
Naruto wobbled away from the party, tripping over hidden objects in the snow, wishing he could sleep. He turned around another corner and walked face first into a wall.
Ow...
Okay. Look up, where am I??
Hmmm....It's a lollipop...
Brain. Wake up.
It's the Uchiha symbol. SASUKE!
Wasn't at party....is home!
Kay....now knock!
The blonde pounded on his friend's door, yelling at him to open it.
After five minutes of hammering, Sasuke still hadn't opened the door, and Naruto was about ready to pass out.
“Wouldn't hurt t'sleep fer one minnnn.....”
- - - - - - -
When Sasuke got home half an hour later he found Naruto asleep at his front door, shivering and lightly blanketed by snow.
Sasuke shook his head, opened the door, and bent down to pick Naruto up.
When he had the blonde in his arms, he carried him in and laid him down on the couch.
Naruto made a small noise of disappointment when the warmth left him, and he clung lightly to Sasuke's shirt, shivering and mewling.
The Uchiha smiled and lifted Naruto's hands from his clothes, leaned over, and kissed him softly on the forehead.
Naruto smiled in his sleep and murmured a small “Sasuke...” in a happy voice.
Sasuke blushed and went to get a blanket for his friend.
Chapter one.
Naruto giggled and hiccuped as the room spun around him. He felt hands lightly pushing him towards the door, and saying “Naruto, why don't you step outside and get some fresh air??”.
He nodded blearily at the speaker and as soon he shut the door behind him he heard the lock click. Kiba's voice was heard on the other side, “Sakura, have you seen Naruto?”.
You could practically hear her smirking. “Only when he arrived. Sorry, Kiba.”
He sighed. “Oh well... I hope he didn't go outside, it's bloody cold out there, and it's snowing again.”
Naruto leaned against the wall, trying to think straight, shaking his head, trying to clear it.
Okay...Keys?
In Jacket.
Jacket?
Inside.
Walk forward.
Knock.
Waiiit....
Okay, no answer.
Turn around.
Find someone I know...
Naruto wobbled away from the party, tripping over hidden objects in the snow, wishing he could sleep. He turned around another corner and walked face first into a wall.
Ow...
Okay. Look up, where am I??
Hmmm....It's a lollipop...
Brain. Wake up.
It's the Uchiha symbol. SASUKE!
Wasn't at party....is home!
Kay....now knock!
The blonde pounded on his friend's door, yelling at him to open it.
After five minutes of hammering, Sasuke still hadn't opened the door, and Naruto was about ready to pass out.
“Wouldn't hurt t'sleep fer one minnnn.....”
- - - - - - -
When Sasuke got home half an hour later he found Naruto asleep at his front door, shivering and lightly blanketed by snow.
Sasuke shook his head, opened the door, and bent down to pick Naruto up.
When he had the blonde in his arms, he carried him in and laid him down on the couch.
Naruto made a small noise of disappointment when the warmth left him, and he clung lightly to Sasuke's shirt, shivering and mewling.
The Uchiha smiled and lifted Naruto's hands from his clothes, leaned over, and kissed him softly on the forehead.
Naruto smiled in his sleep and murmured a small “Sasuke...” in a happy voice.
Sasuke blushed and went to get a blanket for his friend.
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I FINALLY wrote another fanfic... It's been AGES.
Well, yeah, here's Chapter one, currently I've written up to half of chapter 6, but they're all on paper, so I have to type them.
(I know the first chapter kind of sucks, but that's because I had an idea and I really wanted to write it. The next chapters are honestly much better.)
COMMENTS AND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ARE WELCOME AND WANTED!
Well, yeah, here's Chapter one, currently I've written up to half of chapter 6, but they're all on paper, so I have to type them.
(I know the first chapter kind of sucks, but that's because I had an idea and I really wanted to write it. The next chapters are honestly much better.)
COMMENTS AND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ARE WELCOME AND WANTED!
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Okay, here's some constructive criticism.
- It's a little hard to tell what point of view this is in. Is it 3rd person? 1st in Naruto's?
... That's the only thing I can say.
- It's a little hard to tell what point of view this is in. Is it 3rd person? 1st in Naruto's?
... That's the only thing I can say.